CAP 22 CAP 22 - Part 14 - Pokedex Submissions

[KirisameAlice]

WIP

Kurfluffle, the Body Pillow Pokémon

X/OR: Kerfluffle's body seems to be made almost completely out of plush. Despite this, scientists can confirm that Kerfluffle is purely organic.

Y/AS: Even though Kerfluffle appears to be a very lovable Pokémon, it is known to be very aggressive. It will threaten it's opponent if it must flee a fight.

 

[LucarioOfLegends]

WIP

Kerfluffle, the Play Pillow Pokémon

X/OR: While its body is incredibly soft, Kerfluffle can smash through stone pillars with its powerful punches.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle uses verbal attacks on opponents to lower their guard. It then uses its light weight to strike at incredible speeds.

 

[Ba'al]

Yoshiblaze - X/OR Tmi489 - Both KirisameAlice Second WIP, Y/AS

Fix the it's to its in your respective entries. AFAIK the only word possessive contractions don't apply to is "it".

GreenGogoatttt - hard, punching Pokekeytrix - bedrooms, as

Fairly sure you guys need commas for clarity in between those words.

WIP

Kerfluffle, the Bad Attitude Pokemon.

X/OR: This Pokemon prides itself on the pleasant aroma it exudes. However, if someone does not want to smell it, it gets upset and tries to force them by hugging them close with its powerful limbs.

Y/AS: It is very impertinent. Though usually passively lazing around, any who bother it immediately find themselves on the receiving end of threats, punches, and powerful shockwaves.

I know "bad attitude pokemon" sounds more dark type, but I based it more on the crazed look in its eyes and general mean-ness of moves like Taunt and PS

 

[KrewlKat]

Okay this is gonna be totally different from my last one and advice appreciated
WIP

Kerfluffle, the Pillow Golem Pokemon

X/OR: It is said that long ago the first Kerfluffle was created to protect a mans son, and when it failed banished itself to the woods.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle are deceptively cruel to everything but children, who they would give their lives for in an instant.

Oh and Ba'al yours are over the 25 word limit.

 

[KirisameAlice]

Ah! Thank you Ba'al, I completely overlooked that.

 

[willow616]

I decided to change my submission for Y / AS because not convince me at all

WIP
krefluffle: the elf pillow Pokemon

X/OR: Kalos grandmothers often tell their grandchildren do not go outside during nap because a monster would take them, it is believed that monster is kerfluffle

Y/AS:it is difficult to see a kerfuffle in the wild, usually live in caves practicing their deadlys embraces

 

[HeaLnDeaL]

So we have a lot of cool submissions, but no final subs at all! Feel free to start making final subs. However, please be excessively mindful of the OP's rules.

 

[Yoshiblaze]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Punchy Pillow Pokemon

X/OR: Using its pillow-like hands, Kerfluffle protects its trainer at all cost from any danger. Kerfluffle will often try to intimidate threats by calling them names.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle is a playful Pokemon that enjoys being around humans, but it will get annoyed if a human or Pokemon tries to sleep on it.

 

[Rasdanation]

Well, here goes for the final submission:

Final Sumbission

Kerfluffle, the Stuffed Pokemon.

X/OR: Kerfluffle acts friendly to other Pokemon, but if anything were to sleep on it's soft, pillow-like body, then it will go into a rage.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle's stuffing produces a strong aroma. It uses this aroma to attract nearby wild Pokemon closer, so that it can attack them.

 

[KirisameAlice]

Uh oh. You guys be careful when you do your Final Submission and reread the rules before you submit; each submission should only be 25 words long per entry and that's a huge problem I've been seeing with the WIPs, just thought it wouldn't be a big deal worth pointing out since it might just be ideas being thrown out there.

If you're unsure about how the words are being counted, it wouldn't hurt to use a WIP to ask if you're going over or not. I'd hate to see people disqualified because they put too much into their entries.

 

[Rasdanation]

Uh oh. You guys be careful when you do your Final Submission and reread the rules before you submit; each submission should only be 25 words long per entry and that's a huge problem I've been seeing with the WIPs, just thought it wouldn't be a big deal worth pointing out since it might just be ideas being thrown out there.

If you're unsure about how the words are being counted, it wouldn't hurt to use a WIP to ask if you're going over or not. I'd hate to see people disqualified because they put too much into their entries.

Just realized that my X/OR submission is 7 words above the maximum, I'll fix that =P
It should be better now

 

[emma]

Final Submission

Kerfuffle, the Pillow Pokemon

X/OR: Kerfuffle is always happy, even when it's training hard punching with its fluffy, pillow-like hands.

Y/AS: Kerfuffle gives out a comfortable feeling to its trainer and other pokemon when it's around them.

 

[snake]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Deception Pokémon

X/OR: After luring in its victims with friendly, innocuous gestures, Kerfluffle annihilates them with a powerful Moonblast.

Y/AS: It is often found in darkened rooms. Many of its victim's final memories are of Kerfluffle's glinting eyes and deceptive smile.

 

[KirisameAlice]

Final Submission

Kurfluffle, the Body Pillow Pokémon

X/OR: Kerfluffle's body seems to be made almost completely out of plush. Despite this, scientists can confirm that Kerfluffle is purely organic.

Y/AS: Even though Kerfluffle appears to be very lovable, it is known to be very aggressive. It threatens foes if it must flee a fight.

 

[willow616]

Final Submission

krefluffle: elf pillow Pokemon

X/OR: Kalos grandmothers often tell their grandchildren do not go outside during nap because a kerfluffle would take them

Y/AS:it is difficult to see a kerfuffle in the wild, usually live in caves practicing their deadlys embraces

 

[Amitghosh]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Fluffy Pokémon

X/OR: Weary Pokémon often fall asleep on wild Kerfluffle, mistaking them for pillows. Most of them never wake up again.

Y/AS: Tame Kerfluffle are popular in Pokémon Contests, as they make an excellent pair with sleeping Munchlax. They like taunting their opponents and fleeing right after.

 

[iwantalolly]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Punching Pokémon

X/OR: Kerfluffle enjoys to yell and thrash about before seeking refuge to protect itself.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle adores playing with people and Pokémon. However, it usually ends up injuring someone because it likes to be rough and use its fists.

 

[Bice]

Final Submssion

Kerfluffle, the Tough Fluff Pokémon

X/OR: When it's at the peak of health, it emits a sweet and pleasant aroma. Because of this trait, Trainers meticulously work to keep it healthy.

Y/AS: It uses its clumsy demeanor to throw off opponents, then it hits them with a punch that can shatter concrete.

 

[Deck Knight]

Final Submission:

Kerfluffle, the Right Stuff Pokemon

X/OR: Kerfluffle can knock out a grown man in one punch - but it always carries the opponent to their bed to recover afterward.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle's stuffing is made of tightly woven muscle fibers that allow it to be as rigid or soft as the moment requires.

 

[KeeganSkymin4444]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Pillow Fight Pokemon

X/OR: Kerfluffle is very energetic and rarely serious about anything, making it popular with children. However, it instinctively comforts people if it feels that they're sad.

Y/AS: When it is play fighting, it has developed the technique of using the clawless backsides of its hands as to not seriously harm their opponent.

 

[KrewlKat]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Pillow Golem Pokemon

X/OR: It is said that long ago the first Kerfluffle was made to protect a child , and when he died,it banished itself to the woods.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle are deceptively cruel to everything but children, who they are exeptionally kind to, and would give their lives for in an instant.

 

[LucarioOfLegends]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Play Pillow Pokemon

X/OR: Kerfluffle's body is extremely light and fluffy. This allows it to avoid attacks and strike at blinding speed.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle enjoys toying with its opponents through verbal taunts. An especially mischievous one will even mess with its own Trainer.

 

[ThePsychoBear]

WIP

Kerfluffle, the Disparaging Pokémon

X/OR: Even though it appears weak and soft, Kerfluffle is capable of shattering steel with a single blow.

Y/AS: Kerfluffle loves roughhousing, it tends to insult other Pokémon for fun. Making it generally disliked by others.

 

[Falchion]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Pillow Fight Pokémon.

X/OR: It is thought to have arisen from a pillow bathed in mysterious rays. Its playful nature and pleasing scent incite others to frolic with it.

Y/AS: Able to dodge attacks with surprising speed, it is friendly but loves to roughhouse. Occasionally, its strange gestures may be mistaken for aggression.

 

[Pika Xreme]

Final Submission

Kerfluffle, the Pillow Fighter Pokémon.

X/OR: It is a born fighter. Even untrained, it can withstand over 100 tons of force. It often teases its opponents.

Y/AS: Despite its soft appearance, it is a very strong Pokemon. It can knock a Delibird out of the sky with a mere Fairy Wind.