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QC 2/2 Amazing job

take out h wish and just keep s web and spore, greatly assisting in lowering speed or putting a foe to sleep so ursaluna can set up safer. QC 1/2 well done!

will take a look after these implements, ty >:)

heyyy MattandMello ive notice you didnt follow the formatting and have many grammatical errors which will be a pain for the gp team to go over. so i suggest going over Spelling and Grammar Standards | Smogon Forums and redoing your analysis. Once your done, me or another qc member will go over...

Will take a look after implements, ty buddy

QC 2/2 well done.

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User name: boomp Tiers Not Played (Binding) None Tiers Preferred (not binding) SV, ORAS, BW Timezone GMT-7

QC 1/2 looks good to me

QC 2/2 Great Job

QC 1/2 Meow Meow!!! >:) implemented, thank you boomp :chien-pao:

- Generalize the part on pivoting as this reads imo that corvi is just sitting infront of the two and clicking U-turn. Just say provides pivoting with U-turn... - Most Electric Mons is just fearing Dragonite to begin with due to begin with. I would just end it off after thanks to its ground...

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Ursaluna-B is banned from monotype. Remove all mentions of it in your analyses, ty <3

- Specify the Zama is non-Choice Band Zamazenta - Take away Iron Moth and T Flame as examples and just add in Volcarona. Specs Moth runs Discharge and T Flame can either Wisp the urshifu or just flat out ohko keldeo. Too many examples remove Corvi and Pex. QC 2/2 Well done.

QC 1/2 :gengargrin:

I would put offensive infront of Jirachi, SpD jirachi is a flat out 3hko. You can mention a notable ko the bird claims due to stealth rock. For example you now just flat out OHKO M Venu after Stealth Rock QC 2/2 well done.

TheKingsLeap change your prefix to copyediting now