Red Orb Landorus [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into and lets it threaten Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out walls like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot turns Landorus into a deadly late-game cleaner and voids the aforementioned walls. Stealth Rock can force chip damage on checks and take advantage of the switches Landorus forces against Pokemon like Corviknight. Rock Slide helps hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire; a Naive nature should be used if using this. Taunt h denies recovery, helping beat Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity is a niche option that helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex. Landorus struggles against Levitate users like Toxapex and Garganacl, Fire-resistant Flying-types like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire if not running Rock Slide, and natural walls like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia. As such, Solgaleo, Iron Boulder, and Chien-Pao, respectively, are good teammates. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Arceus-Ground, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus pairs well with physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally they can also additionally support Landorus with U-turn.

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Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
[SET]
(Red Orb) Landorus (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Gravity / Rock Slide / Sludge Bomb / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker and setup sweeper thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into, being able to threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a late-game letting it break through Latiosite Garganacl when not running Gravity. Gravity helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex. Rock Slide helps hit Flying-types like Ho-Oh and Moltres. Sludge Bomb hits Fairy-types like Pixilate Dragonite and Arceus-Fairy. Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks. Taunt helps stop status users like Giratina and Milotic. Landorus prefers running Timid nature to bolster its Speed, alternatively it can run Naive nature when using Rock Slide making it more frail specially. Landorus can be very limited by moveslot options, being walled by Latiasite users like Toxapex and specially defensive Garganacl when not running Gravity, and walled by Ho-Oh when not running Rock Slide. Landorus can be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Darkrai, and Chien-Pao. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Calm Mind Arceus-Ground, Sandy Shocks, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Ready for qc hopefully (already talked to slither wing about this but i feel like some of the slashes in the 4th moveslot should be removed as most of them arent really useful imo)
 
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[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Gravity / Rock Slide / Sludge Bomb / Stealth Rock / Taunt (qc team has decided to limit 4th slot to 3 slashes & leave the other 2 as oneline mentions)

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker and, if running Nasty Plot, setup sweeper thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into, being able to threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a (deadly or some other adjective here) late-game cleaner letting it break through the Pokemon that otherwise wall it Latiosite Garganacl when not running Gravity. Gravity helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire, Latiosite Garganacl, and Toxapex (move this after taunt to match set order). Rock Slide helps hit Flying-types foes resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Moltres Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Sludge Bomb hits Fairy-types like Pixilate Altarianite Dragonite and Arceus-Fairy (wball is good vs fairyceus, its only rly dnite. also move this after gravity for set order). Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks (to pressure the opposing team w hazard chip). Taunt helps stop status users like Giratina and Milotic (how? ure literally immune to WoW / twave and they dont get tox. taunt helps in denying recovery or setup aiding in breaking waterceus / toxapex better). Landorus prefers running Timid nature to bolster its Speed, alternatively it can run Naive nature when using Rock Slide making it more frail specially. Landorus can be very limited by moveslot options, being walled by Latiasite users like Toxapex and specially defensive Garganacl when not running Gravity, and walled by Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire when not running Rock Slide. Landorus can be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Darkrai, and Chien-Pao (replace one of the darks with hamurott). Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Calm Mind Arceus-Ground, Sandy Shocks Walking Wake (more relevant), and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala.

explain common physical breakers / cleaners, preferrably faster ones like shifu synergize well with lando-i by pressuring its common switch-ins / forming pivoting cores if uturn lando or helping it get on the field if np.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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QC 1/2, overall good content
 

Yoko

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[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Gravity / Rock Slide / Sludge Bomb / Stealth Rock / Taunt (qc team has decided to limit 4th slot to 3 slashes & leave the other 2 as oneline mentions)

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker and, if running Nasty Plot, setup sweeper thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into, being able to threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a (deadly or some other adjective here) late-game cleaner letting it break through the Pokemon that otherwise wall it Latiosite Garganacl when not running Gravity. Gravity helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire, Latiosite Garganacl, and Toxapex (move this after taunt to match set order). Rock Slide helps hit Flying-types foes resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Moltres Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Sludge Bomb hits Fairy-types like Pixilate Altarianite Dragonite and Arceus-Fairy (wball is good vs fairyceus, its only rly dnite. also move this after gravity for set order). Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks (to pressure the opposing team w hazard chip). Taunt helps stop status users like Giratina and Milotic (how? ure literally immune to WoW / twave and they dont get tox. taunt helps in denying recovery or setup aiding in breaking waterceus / toxapex better). Landorus prefers running Timid nature to bolster its Speed, alternatively it can run Naive nature when using Rock Slide making it more frail specially. Landorus can be very limited by moveslot options, being walled by Latiasite users like Toxapex and specially defensive Garganacl when not running Gravity, and walled by Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire when not running Rock Slide. Landorus can be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Darkrai, and Chien-Pao (replace one of the darks with hamurott). Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Calm Mind Arceus-Ground, Sandy Shocks Walking Wake (more relevant), and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala.

explain common physical breakers / cleaners, preferrably faster ones like shifu synergize well with lando-i by pressuring its common switch-ins / forming pivoting cores if uturn lando or helping it get on the field if np.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.102/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
Grammar checked by:
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QC 1/2, overall good content
tysm implemented
 

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[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker, if running Nasty Plot, and setup sweeper This reads kind of unclear, I'd probably change it to just mention its wallbreaking capabilities and remove the Nasty Plot mention, it isn't really a setup sweeper regardless thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into, being able to threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl This should probably be split into 2 sentences overall, where you emphasize in the second sentence how prominent it's STAB combination is. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a deadly late-game a cleaner, (AC) letting it break through the previously mentioned Pokemon that otherwise wall it. Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks and pressure the opposing team with entry hazard chip. Rock Slide helps hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Taunt helps in denying recovery and help aid in breaking Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex Emphasize that it's not normally ran and that it's a niche option. Sludge Bomb hits Fairy-types like Altarianite Dragonite Landorus-I doesn't win any interaction versus Dragonite regardless, plus the other move options are almost always better. Landorus prefers running Timid nature to bolster its Speed, alternatively it can run Naive nature when using Rock Slide making it more frail specially You can shorten this down to just mention that you run Naive if you're running Rock Slide to circumvent a damage decrease. Landorus can be very limited by moveslot options, being walled by Latiasite users like Toxapex and specially defensive Garganacl when not running Gravity, and walled by Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire when not running Rock Slide This isn't really saying anything, its better to just mention that it may struggle versus Latiasite users / Flying types that resist Fire and what teammates can help with that. Landorus can be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Hisuian Samurott, and Chien-Pao Actually, combine this with the previous sentence since they talk about similar enough things, makes it easier to read and isn't as lenghty. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Calm Mind Arceus-Ground Both sets of Arceus-ground screw you over since they tend to run more Speed to outspeed you anyway, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus can also pair well with common physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally they can forming pivoting cores with Landorus if it's (AA) running U-turn, (AC) or help it get on the field if it's (AA) Nasty Plot.

Don't forget to remove a space here, there should be one space between set comments and set credits
[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zastra.558636/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/slither-wing.603931/ Don't forget as well to credit both of us :3
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
QC 2/2 If you have any questions you know where to find me :)
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
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[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker, if running Nasty Plot, and setup sweeper This reads kind of unclear, I'd probably change it to just mention its wallbreaking capabilities and remove the Nasty Plot mention, it isn't really a setup sweeper regardless thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into, being able to threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl This should probably be split into 2 sentences overall, where you emphasize in the second sentence how prominent it's STAB combination is. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a deadly late-game a cleaner, (AC) letting it break through the previously mentioned Pokemon that otherwise wall it. Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks and pressure the opposing team with entry hazard chip. Rock Slide helps hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Taunt helps in denying recovery and help aid in breaking Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex Emphasize that it's not normally ran and that it's a niche option. Sludge Bomb hits Fairy-types like Altarianite Dragonite Landorus-I doesn't win any interaction versus Dragonite regardless, plus the other move options are almost always better. Landorus prefers running Timid nature to bolster its Speed, alternatively it can run Naive nature when using Rock Slide making it more frail specially You can shorten this down to just mention that you run Naive if you're running Rock Slide to circumvent a damage decrease. Landorus can be very limited by moveslot options, being walled by Latiasite users like Toxapex and specially defensive Garganacl when not running Gravity, and walled by Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire when not running Rock Slide This isn't really saying anything, its better to just mention that it may struggle versus Latiasite users / Flying types that resist Fire and what teammates can help with that. Landorus can be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Hisuian Samurott, and Chien-Pao Actually, combine this with the previous sentence since they talk about similar enough things, makes it easier to read and isn't as lenghty. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Calm Mind Arceus-Ground Both sets of Arceus-ground screw you over since they tend to run more Speed to outspeed you anyway, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus can also pair well with common physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally they can forming pivoting cores with Landorus if it's (AA) running U-turn, (AC) or help it get on the field if it's (AA) Nasty Plot.

Don't forget to remove a space here, there should be one space between set comments and set credits
[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/slither-wing.603931/ Don't forget as well to credit both of us :3
Grammar checked by:
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QC 2/2 If you have any questions you know where to find me :)
implemented lmk if i should change smt but otherwise
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[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage, (comma) and utility, which makes it hard to switch into. its promient Its prominent STAB combination also lets it threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate while generating momentum. (period) while Nasty Plot can turn Landorus into a deadly late-game cleaner, (replace period with comma) letting it break through the previously mentioned Pokemon that otherwise wall it. Stealth Rock can help helps take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks and pressure the opposing team with entry hazard chip. Rock Slide helps Landorus hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Taunt helps in denying recovery and help aid aids in breaking Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity is a niche option that helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex. Landorus can run a Naive nature to circumvent a damage decrease when running Rock Slide. (I saw Slither Wing's above comment about removing the Timid reference, but the way this sentence is worded makes it sounds like it contrasts with something missing. Might recommend a lead-in phrase) Landorus can have a hard time against Latiasite users like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking, as well as Flying-types that resist its STABs like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire. Landorus can also be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Hisuian Samurott, and Chien-Pao. (There are several competing ideas in the prior sentence and it needs to be split up, but I can't do this without changing the meaning of the sentence. Would recommend rewriting) Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Arceus-Ground, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus can also pair well with common physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally, (comma) they can form pivoting cores with Landorus if it's running U-turn (remove comma) or help it get on the field if it's running Nasty Plot.


[SET CREDITS]
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ok so we've been discussing this in the gp discord and this is far too giant and unwieldy, so would recommend cutting away a lot of fluff here before getting a full GP check. some proposed changes are below:
[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into and lets it threaten Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. its promient STAB combination also lets it threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it walls like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn turns Landorus into a deadly late-game cleaner and voids the aforementioned walls. letting it break through the previously mentioned Pokemon that otherwise wall it. Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks and pressure the opposing team with entry hazard chip force chip damage on checks and take advantage of the switches Landorus forces against Pokemon like Corviknight. Rock Slide helps hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire; (add semi-colon) a Naive nature should be used if using this. Taunt helps in denying recovery and help aid in breaking denies recovery, helping beat Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity is a niche option that helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex. Landorus can run a Naive to circumvent a damage decrease when running Rock Slide. Landorus can have a hard time against Latiasite users like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking, as well as Flying-types that resist its STABs like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire, Landorus can also be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Hisuian Samurott, and Chien-Pao. Landorus struggles against Levitate users like Toxapex and Garganacl, Fire-resistant Flying-types like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire if not running Rock Slide, and natural walls like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia. As such, Solgaleo, Iron Boulder, and Chien-Pao, respectively, are good teammates. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Arceus-Ground, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus can also pair well with common pairs well with physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally they can form pivoting cores with Landorus if it's running U-turn, or help it get on the field if it's Nasty Plot. they can also additionally support Landorus with U-turn.

[SET CREDITS] (removed one of the linebreaks)
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zastra.558636/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/slither-wing.603931/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
 

Yoko

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ok so we've been discussing this in the gp discord and this is far too giant and unwieldy, so would recommend cutting away a lot of fluff here before getting a full GP check. some proposed changes are below:
[SET]
Red Orb (Landorus) (M) @ Red Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid / Naive Nature
- Earth Power
- Weather Ball
- U-turn / Nasty Plot
- Rock Slide / Stealth Rock / Taunt

[SET COMMENTS]
Red Orb Landorus is an excellent wallbreaker thanks to its amazing offensive STAB combination, fantastic Special Attack, and great coverage and utility, which makes it hard to switch into and lets it threaten Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. its promient STAB combination also lets it threaten out Pokemon like Great Tusk, defensive Eternatus, and Garganacl. U-turn lets Landorus pivot out of Pokemon that can wall it walls like Blue Orb Lugia, Latiasite Toxapex, and Arceus-Water and generate momentum, while Nasty Plot can turn turns Landorus into a deadly late-game cleaner and voids the aforementioned walls. letting it break through the previously mentioned Pokemon that otherwise wall it. Stealth Rock can help take advantage of the forced switches that Landorus causes against Pokemon like Corviknight to hinder its checks and pressure the opposing team with entry hazard chip force chip damage on checks and take advantage of the switches Landorus forces against Pokemon like Corviknight. Rock Slide helps hit foes that are resistant to its STAB moves like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire; (add semi-colon) a Naive nature should be used if using this. Taunt helps in denying recovery and help aid in breaking denies recovery, helping beat Arceus-Water and Toxapex better. Gravity is a niche option that helps against Ground-immune Pokemon like Latiasite Clodsire and Toxapex. Landorus can run a Naive to circumvent a damage decrease when running Rock Slide. Landorus can have a hard time against Latiasite users like Toxapex and Galarian Slowking, as well as Flying-types that resist its STABs like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire, Landorus can also be walled by Pokemon like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia, which can make it appreciate offensive teammates like Gouging Fire, Hisuian Samurott, and Chien-Pao. Landorus struggles against Levitate users like Toxapex and Garganacl, Fire-resistant Flying-types like Ho-Oh and Pinsirite Gouging Fire if not running Rock Slide, and natural walls like Blissey, Lunala, and Blue Orb Lugia. As such, Solgaleo, Iron Boulder, and Chien-Pao, respectively, are good teammates. Landorus can be overwhelmed by faster Pokemon like Arceus-Ground, Walking Wake, and Iron Boulder, making it appreciate defensive teammates like Blissey, Latiasite Galarian Slowking, and Lunala. Landorus can also pair well with common pairs well with physical wallbreakers like Urshifu-R and Galarian Zapdos, which can threaten its common switch-ins like Pinsirite Gouging Fire and Blissey; additionally they can form pivoting cores with Landorus if it's running U-turn, or help it get on the field if it's Nasty Plot. they can also additionally support Landorus with U-turn.

[SET CREDITS] (removed one of the linebreaks)
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zastra.558636/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/slither-wing.603931/
Grammar checked by:
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