LC Mudbray [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

[genisu]

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is one of the best entry hazard setters in LC with the ability to tank attacks from physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo, and Hisuian Growlithe as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam hits Pokemon that are resistant to its other moves and is a 100% accurate, low-risk move against most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps defensively against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder, while offensively, it boosts the power of Heavy Slam.

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray, as it checks Ground-immune and Ground-resistant foes such as Gastly and Snivy. In return, Mudbray threatens the Steel- and Rock-types such as Tinkatink, Glimmet, and Hisuian Growlithe that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poison- and Steel-types like Stunky, Pawniard, and Tinkatink for it. Finally, Snubbull and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core, as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbull's weaknesses with ease and Snubbull can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

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[Bella]

AMQC, implement whatever.

Donkey

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is considered one of the best rockers hazard setters in LC as well as a fearsome attacker and wall. Stealth Rock allows Mudbray to force progress for its teammates. (This feels self expanitory, Rocks do what rocks do. If you wanna add this line add examples of what it wears down + what teammates gets more enabled by the chip in the second paragraph.) Stone Edge allows it to threaten Vullaby as well as Larvesta. (Wingull and Watt are p shit atm) punish Flying-types that would normally wall it like Vullaby, Wattrel, and Wingull. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its big size heavy weight and Tera Steel to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves (You mention Tera Steel later in the paragraph, mention how it boosts Heavy Slam there.) like Toedscool as well as being a 100% accurate move that can hit common levitate pokemon Pokemon like Gastly and Koffing, as well as common Fairy types like Snubbull and Impidimp. (Just mention how its a great midground into stuff like Gastly, Koffing, etc.) 236 Speed allows it to be faster then Tinkatink, 36 Def allows it to hit Eviolite numbers, stuffing the rest into HP. (The EVs are pretty obvious; Max Atk, max Speed, then EVs invested into whereever else it can be. No need to talk about this.) Tera Steel is used as it can resist two of its three weaknesses and remain neutral to the last one, which helps against common threats like Snivy and Shellder. Offensively, as stated above, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage. (Combine these 2 Sentences together, something like "Tera Steel can resist Grass- and Ice-type attacks from Pokemon like Snivy and Shellder- Mudbray can struggle against and also boosts the power of Heavy Slam.)

Mudbray is a great choice for a variety of teams, (AC) as many of them appreciate its entry hazards and coverage options. Offensively, Snivy is a good pair with Mudbray as a common Snivy check is Stunky, which is walled and killed by Mudbray. (Mention what Snivy does back for Mudbray.) Another teammate that benefits from Mudbray's presence is Vullaby, as Mudbray can wall and kill both of its main counters, Tinkatink and Glimmet. (Once again, what does Vullaby do back for Mudbray?) However, Mudbray is weak to Snivy without tera, so common checks like Stunky, Vullaby, and Foongus are great teammates. Mudbray is also walled by Toedscool, which gets checked by Vullaby and gets 1v1ed by Foongus. (Just say Grass-types in general, Mudbray also loses to Foongus.)
(Mention stuff who like having Vullaby / Growlith-H / Whatever chipped down heavily by the Stealth Rock Mudbray sets up.)
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[genisu]

thanks bella!

 

[gali]

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is considered one of the best hazard setters in LC as well as a fearsome attacker and wall. (Be more specific about Mudbray's role in this opening sentence. It's a strong physical tank that uses its power and bulk to set up Stealth Rock and punch holes.) Stone Edge allows it to threaten Vullaby as well as Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it (don't use constructions like "allows it" and "as well as" in multiple sentences in a row; it makes your writing sound repetitive. The content is fine but add some variety!) to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves like Toedscool as well as being a 100% accurate move that can be a great midground into common levitate Pokemon like Gastly and Koffing, as well as common Fairy types like Snubbull and Impidimp. (You need to cut out about 75% of the words in this sentence; saying that it's a reliable midground into most switch-ins will suffice.) Tera Steel is used as it can resist two of its three weaknesses and remain neutral to the last one, (Tera Steel is more about the specific threats it handles; add Vullaby as an example and remove the first clause of this sentence) which helps against common threats like Snivy and Shellder while offensively, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage.



Mudbray is a great choice for a variety of teams, as many of them appreciate its entry hazards and coverage options. Offensively, Snivy is a good pair with Mudbray as a common Snivy check is Stunky, which is walled and killed by Mudbray, while Snivy resists two of Mudbrays three weaknesses. Another teammate that benefits from Mudbray's presence is Vullaby, as Mudbray can wall and kill both of its main counters, Tinkatink and Glimmet, while Vullaby can take on the Grass-types that threaten Mudbray. However, Mudbray is weak to grass types, so common checks like Stunky, Vullaby, and Foongus are great teammates. Other great teammates that can take advantage of rocks chipping mons are Choice-Scarf Mienfoo, as well as many common setup sweepers like Shellder and Magby. Repeatedly switching into hazards can also chip down Vullaby, which is great for grass types like Snivy.

(You will need to rewrite the entire second paragraph. There is a lot of repeated information and not-great examples used in here, and the point of QC is not to write it for you. I recommend focusing on the Pokemon Mudbray threatens (Poisons, Steels, and Growlithe for starters) and the Pokemon it's checked by (Grass-types and Ground immunes to a lesser extent) and the teammates that either appreciate having those threats removed and/or check Mudbray's checks, respectively.)

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tag me when this is implemented for qc 1/2

 

[genisu]

gali hi, thanks for the qc and i think i fixed everything

 

[gali]

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is one of the best hazard setters in LC with its ability to both physically wall (it doesn't really have the longevity to be called a wall; "tank" works better here) many threats to setup (set up what?) as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves like Toedscool (Toed isn't a great example; it's not particularly common and is barely 3HKOed by Heavy Slam) as well as being a 100% accurate move that is a great midground into most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder while offensively, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage.

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray, as it takes on the Grass-types (such as?) for Mudbray, while Mudbray threatens the Steel and Rock-types (such as?) that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poisons and Steels (such as?) for it while resisting 2 of Mudbray's three weaknesses. (Not really a useful point; the most relevant defensive Grass- and Water-types both have a secondary STAB that hits Snivy super effectively) Finally, Snubbull and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbul's weaknesses with ease and Snubbul can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

General note: please give the Spelling And Grammar Standards a read-through and make appropriate edits before you send this into GP.

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1/2!

 

[Coconut]

Nothing is updated from gali's check, implement them before I check this.

 

[genisu]

i didnt see the second check xD my bad

Nothing is updated from gali's check, implement them before I check this.

 

[genisu]

Coconut ready for your qc! tysm

 

[Hacker]

patience

Mudbray is one of the best hazard setters in LC with its ability to both physically tank many threats to setup hazards as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves as well as being a 100% accurate move that is a great midground into most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder while offensively, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage. Mudbray's great ability Stamina allows it to function as a tank to physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo and Hisuian Growlithe, Pokemon that it loses to otherwise. (i would rewrite this sentence to something like mudbray uses stamina to help it tank physical attacks from vullaby, mienfoo, and hisuian growlithe)

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray, as it takes(i think checks makes more sense here since vull isnt really a very strong snivy answer) on the Grass-types such as Foongus and Snivy(i think it would be better to make it something like ground immunities or resistances such as Gastly and Snivy) for Mudbray, while Mudbray threatens the Steel and Rock-types such as Tinkatink, Glimmet, and Hisuian Growlithe that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poisons and Steels like Stunky, Koffing (mudbray doesnt like getting wisped by koffing), Pawniard, and Tinkatink for it. Finally, Snubbul and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbul's weaknesses with ease and Snubbul(Snubbull) can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

qc 2/2

 

[genisu]

patience

Mudbray is one of the best hazard setters in LC with its ability to both physically tank many threats to setup hazards as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves as well as being a 100% accurate move that is a great midground into most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder while offensively, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage. Mudbray's great ability Stamina allows it to function as a tank to physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo and Hisuian Growlithe, Pokemon that it loses to otherwise. (i would rewrite this sentence to something like mudbray uses stamina to help it tank physical attacks from vullaby, mienfoo, and hisuian growlithe)

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray, as it takes(i think checks makes more sense here since vull isnt really a very strong snivy answer) on the Grass-types such as Foongus and Snivy(i think it would be better to make it something like ground immunities or resistances such as Gastly and Snivy) for Mudbray, while Mudbray threatens the Steel and Rock-types such as Tinkatink, Glimmet, and Hisuian Growlithe that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poisons and Steels like Stunky, Koffing (mudbray doesnt like getting wisped by koffing), Pawniard, and Tinkatink for it. Finally, Snubbul and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbul's weaknesses with ease and Snubbul(Snubbull) can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

qc 2/2

bray is faster then koffing and can eq no? tysm btw :)

 

[Hacker]

bray is faster then koffing and can eq no? tysm btw :)

doesnt like switching in rly imo

 

[genisu]

alright thanks will implement

 

[genisu]

GP Team im ready for gp :)

 

[sunny004]

Hello, amcheck here.
add remove comment (AC) = add comma

Wanted to flag my question re: Tera Steel for your attention. It bordered on a QC change so I defer to you for modification.

amcheck

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
-Stealth Rock
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is one of the best entry hazard setters in LC with its ability to both physically tank many threats to set (add space)up hazards as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves as well as being a 100% accurate move that is a great midground into most of its switch-ins. Heavy Slam hits Pokemon that are resistant to its other moves and is a 100% accurate, low-risk move against most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps (defensively? Should probably clarify specifically how it helps against these three threats) against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder, (AC) while offensively, it can boost the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage (you already mentioned "boost the power" before). Mudbray's great ability Stamina allows it to tank attacks from physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo, and Hisuian Growlithe.

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray(replace comma with semicolon); Vullaby checks Ground-immune and resistant foes, as it checks the ground immunities and resistances ("resists" and "immunities" should not be used as nouns. The change to "Vullaby" also reduces ambiguity of "it") such as Gastly and Snivy, while Mudbray threatens the Steel- (add hyphen) and Rock-types such as Tinkatink, Glimmet, and Hisuian Growlithe, (AC) that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poisons and Steels Poison- and Steel-type foes like Stunky, Pawniard, and Tinkatink for it. Finally, Snubbull and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core, (AC) as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbull's weaknesses with ease, (AC) and Snubbull can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

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[Berks]

Yes, Tera Steel is meant to help defensively with those three mons, so adding the word defensively where that comment is in the first paragraph is my suggestion as QC

 

[deetah]

Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (AH) = Add Hyphen
Credit sunny004 for GP alongside myself.

GP 1/1

Mudbray

[SET]
Offensive Stealth Rock (Mudbray) @ Eviolite
Ability: Stamina
Level: 5
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 36 HP / 196 Atk / 36 Def / 236 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge
- Heavy Slam
(Added spaces between the hyphens and move names)

[SET COMMENTS]
Mudbray is one of the best entry hazard setters in LC with its the ability to both physically tank many threats to setup hazards attacks from physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo, and Hisuian Growlithe as well as punch holes into opposing teams. Stone Edge allows it to hit common threats like Vullaby and Larvesta. Heavy Slam allows it to take advantage of its heavy weight to hit Pokemon that are resistant to the other moves as well as being a 100% accurate move that is a great midground into most of its switch-ins. Heavy Slam hits Pokemon that are resistant to its other moves and is a 100% accurate, low-risk move against most of its switch-ins. Tera Steel helps defensively (Adding because QC was okay with it) against common threats like Snivy, Vullaby, and Shellder, (AC) while offensively, it can boost boosts the power of Heavy Slam to do even more damage. Mudbray's great ability Stamina allows it to tank attacks from physical attackers like Vullaby, Mienfoo, and Hisuian Growlithe. (Discussed the change to merge this sentence into the first sentence with Hacker; it makes more sense to include there since you were already talking about Mudbray tanking attacks)

Vullaby is a great teammate for Mudbray, as it checks the ground immunities and resistances Ground-immune and Ground-resistant foes such as Gastly and Snivy. (Period) while In return, Mudbray threatens the Steel-(AH) and Rock-types such as Tinkatink, Glimmet, and Hisuian Growlithe that beat Vullaby. Another common teammate is Snivy, as it appreciates Mudbray's ability to beat Poisons and Steels Poison- and Steel-types like Stunky, Pawniard, and Tinkatink for it. Finally, Snubbull and Mudbray form a powerful defensive core, (AC) as Mudbray takes on both of Snubbull's weaknesses with ease and Snubbull can help against powerful physical threats like Mienfoo and Vullaby.

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GP Team Done

 

[genisu]

oh fuck i didnt get a notif somehow im working on it tysm

 

[genisu]

Yes, Tera Steel is meant to help defensively with those three mons, so adding the word defensively where that comment is in the first paragraph is my suggestion as QC

also can change some rolls offensively tho

 

[Hacker]

https://www.smogon.com/dex/sv/pokemon/mudbray/