A normally docile Pokemon, VOODOOM absorbs the anger and distress of others and releases the pent up rage when provoked, giving it a fierce will to fight. The more pain VOODOOM has stored, the deeper its needles go into its flesh.
Also note that it absorbs anger; thus it has a cleansing effect on its environment, allowing togekiss to come in (no strife)
This one is probably my favorite. I like how it takes a completely different (and probably more accurate) perspective on VOODOOM. Most of us (myself included) have been writing these really dark, sad entries that depict the doll as either evil or misunderstood. But think about it: a voodoo doll isn't evil or vengeful, the person using it is. In reality, its presence benefits everyone - a person feeling anger or frustration can use it to relieve these negative emotions instead of harming actual people. Of course, if you believe voodoo actually works, I guess that's a different story. :naughty:
I also like how this entry sets up the possibility for a mutual relationship with Togekiss without explicitly stating that the two Pokemon are friends. However, it looks a little long to me, and as you said, it makes readers question why VOODOOM doesn't learn Bide or Rage. If you cut out the parts I underlined, that might help with both those issues.
Also, this:
Final Submission
VOODOOM, the Black Magic Pokemon
"On stormy nights, groups of them gather deep in the forest. They leave behind strange symbols carved on trees."